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The moon is big, the moon is bright;
It's plain to see the bones to-night.
They're stark and sharp in its pale light.
It's plain to see the bones.

The owls are hungry where they squat,
They see things that you'd rather not,
They say things that are best forgot,
In hoots and squeaks and moans.

Their feathers light are white and bleak,
They've sharp bright claws and sharper beaks.
Not one of them's been fed for weeks.
They want to eat your eyes.

A boy who wanders through the wastes
Is doomed to fall to their grim tastes;
They peck his innards into pastes.
The child, defenseless, dies.

The feathers whirr round his remains;
Young Tom will never live again.
A pale owl hoots a dull refrain
In melancholy tones.

The moon is big, the moon is bright;
It's plain to see the bones to-night.
They're stark and sharp in its pale light.
It's plain to see Tom's bones.
©2006-2009 ~ormsqueak
:iconormsqueak:

Author's Comments

I actually hate dA's poetry submission system. 8D'

And I'd totally read this to children.


Edit: Wow ... daily deviation? I'm totally boggled, ahaha @_@ Thank you so much, ^GeneratingHype!

Daily Deviation

Given 2008-03-29

Bones, by *ormsqueak, is catchy, crafty, and something I might actually read to a child or two, too. (Featured by `GeneratingHype)

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:iconfrostious:
Guh, so great! I'm so envious of people who can write, not to mention write poetry. :heart: I love how freaky and grotesque it is without being, y'know, gross and gruesome - it does sound like an old children's story/nursery rhyme. Too bad children's stories these days are all "cleaned up" and un-scary and boring.

But yeah, I'd so totally read this to my chilrdren, too. :D
:iconkamikaze-kaitou-taco:
xD
ayup, IŽd read it to my childrenikins, too <3
just too show them how cruel you are <D *shot*

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Tired and sick of everything~
:iconlivingthroughhate:
I'm so reading this to my grandchildren. <owlphobiacommenceselohel>

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Walking home from work
Stop at the supermarket
The condiment aisle
A jar of pickles catches the eye
Made eye contact with a solitary pickle
Bought the jar, took it home.
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:evillaugh:

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I am the one and only, in Heaven and on Earth. - Miyavi

Sometimes Silence is the loudest Scream ..... or something XD
:iconreisu:
I'll have you know this is the first poem I've ever faved >_> It is rather lovely. Children need more stuff like this :P

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~Kaorick is my sweetie.
:iconspader7:
wow. :heart: instant fav.
I will definately read this to every child I meet.

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:iconwbrooks:
I will read this to my grandchildren to teach them the horrors of birds. Then we will watch 'The Birds', and then their parents will never bother me to babysit ever again! *cackle*

In all seriousness, though, this is brilliant! :3

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:icongreatringmaster:
There was a Tom the last poem o' horror you wrote too, wasn't there. Is this some deep-seated grudge? Some conspiracy against all Toms? WELL? 8O

(this poem = brilliant, BTW. Very eerie and the rhyming structure is impressively tight.)

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common sense is what tells us the world is flat
:iconormsqueak:
Yeah, there was ... I'm not sure why. I was vaguely meaning to change it but I can't be bothered now :3

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"Life is not peaceful," said Snufkin contentedly.
:iconazvolrien:
Oh, I'd read it to children too.

"Now, wasn't that a nice poem?"
Small child: *starts to cry*

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